2015년 9월 25일 금요일
The ideal place for me to concentrate.
I've always wanted to have a place where I can concentrate thoroughly. Although the place does not exist, I can tell anybody about my perfect place precisely. My place's size is about 10 square meters or more. Ceiling is 5 meters above the ground. I want my place to be quite wide and broad, because I hate the feeling of cramped. The wall of my perfect place is covered by plain light blue wallpaper except for the floor. I chose blue to comfort my eyes after a long time of concentration. Eyes get tired so fast these days. The floor should be covered by dark brown rug, and the rug must be all over the floor. I like to study at night, because it's very quite. Since it's too quite, I can clearly hear my feet rubbing the wooden floor of my room. It disturbs me badly. That's why I want my ideal place's floor to be rug all over. There is one big door that connects my place to outside world. It shouldn't have any patterns that might distract me. There is also one long desk made of wood on the right side of the door. The desk is long enough to touch both sides of the wall. Not only the long desk can make my arm move freely, but also it prevents me from wasting my time getting new stuffs from other places. I can just easily fetch, while sitting in my chair to get something new. There are little evergreen plants on the corner of my desk. They indirectly takes me to the heart of Earth's mother nature. It helps me refresh my condition if concentration goes wrong. I don't need any bookshelves. All the books that I need to look, should be on my desk. I also don't need anything that might distracts me from concentrating in my place. I don't need TV, computer, cellphone, toys and even bed. The place is for my genuine concentration, not for resting. I think that's all for the ideal place for me to concentrate. I hope I could get the place I mentioned.
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Dear Ji Hwan,
답글삭제I really liked your paragraph! It's really specific and I feel like I'm in the room. I also need the desk to be big so I can have enough space while I need to concentrate! By the way, I think you should change "it's" to "it". That will make your paragraph look much better. Enjoy your holiday!;)
Sincerely,
Young Eun